Thursday, November 22, 2007

a blue dream

music swirling
across undulating metaphor

faces of hard, gritty disillusion
sparked against
the warm belly
of
youth

gasping
dreaming
hallucinating

a place haunted in blue
and a street, cobble stone prostitute

A quivering old face of wrinkles
searching for solitude

A girl standing over a bridge
waiting for love to return
A boat with a lantern
going by

He, a weather ravaged boy
partakes her breath
off the street

night lamps glower with a halo of flies
a life-large clock spins a universal lie

a town in daze
ripped open by a long, chugging steam train

the blue God
- God of Love
watches
face blackened
heart submerged

haunting echoes,
evil men
hail and snow

rain on
her cheek
wind in
his hair

an appeal of their heart
quickened and threadbare

entwined,
bleeding,
brimming

losing
dripping,
diluting,

hypnotizing


totally
spare

© Rochelle Potkar

5 comments:

Serendipity… said...

This seems to be inspired by SLB's Sawariya!
It is however, much much much better to read your poem than to watch the movie... [:)]
Well written!

AakASH!!! said...

Saawariya! So you finally did see it? :)

bricks and brimstone said...

thank you, heartfelt
:)

aakash!!!,
the answer to poetry can only be poetry.
have you witnessed this poetry yet?

AakASH!!! said...

No but there is more i want to be a witness to.

More, which is getting lesser by the second.

bricks and brimstone said...

what's getting more is illusion
what's getting less is allusion

how little has happened yet

there is more

there is more